First up, let's discuss the electronic cover letter.
Now, in a traditional hard copy submission, you would place your cover letter on top of your manuscript. It would look like a standard business letter with the date, contact information, and the actual content of the letter. Obviously, an electronic letter is going to differ in several ways:
- You don't need to date it or include your email or mailing address of the recipient.
All of these things are going to be automatically included in the email anyway.
- You are going to need to have a subject line.
This line can easily be overlooked when you are busy worrying about the contents of your email. However, having a
No Subject email is the surest way to have it deleted by the recipient unopened. If (like me) the editor/agent is specifically asking for a particular subject line, use it. Otherwise, here are some potential ones:
- Requested Submission -- The best one, but it had better be true.
- Submission from XYZ Conference Attendee -- For people who met an agent/editor at a conference and were invited or told to submit online.
- Picture Book Submission, Teen Romance Submission, etc. -- No harm in naming it what it is.
- Unsolicited Manuscript Submission -- Probably what most submissions are, but avoid using this unless specifically told to.
- You will need to address the email to someone.
I don't mean the To: email line here. I mean that you will need to start your letter to Dear ____. This is a formal business email. Do not just start typing away as if this is a casual acquaintance.
- You will need to sign your full name.
Again, this is a business email. Sign it "Sincerely" or "Thank you again" or something else appropriate with your full name. You are not just dropping them a line. You are approaching a potential business contact.
- Add full contact information after your name.
This includes your phone number, website, and blog(s) if you have one. You can put your address if you like, but most likely the person will either call or reply to the email. You do not need to put your facebook or twitter links here. Even though editors and agents realize what great marketing tools these are, they are a more casual form of communication than websites or blogs. I would only have these if you have thousands of followers and you specifically mentioned them as potential marketing tools in your cover letter.